#secrets shall stay silent

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An endless outcry of confessions went unheard.
Worlds apart yet close to heart.
Like ghosts and dark – we’re close by heart.
Letters too detailed for the rest to bear witness…

You remembered the scent we shared,
Both powerful and fair,
Our arousals and affairs in affectionate cares.
We were inseparable pairs like tables and chairs.

So lord – answer my prayer…
Why is it that their presence wasn’t noticed by us?
Our closeness, our love,
Our hopes and our touch – was it not enough?

Names went forgotten inside solemn lakes,
Frozen tears locked inside our eyes of pain.
Taking a stake and ending a vampiric fate.
Our fangs chipped from the jaw as our pens slipped…

Forbidden from speaking your name,
Uttering in flames as hums were chained…
Tongues enslaved and lungs were blazed;
I am numb from pain – but I succumbed in vain…

A shelf of notes shall remain for self to note.
Every emotion confessed on hold –
As the oceans separated our breaths by rope.
We were left on cliff-hangers as the finale of our show.

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@ocean orbit
@dawn horizon
@cyan spade
@deft kraken
@inner tendon

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@covert geyser
@deep pebble
@rotund rock
@river stream
@subtle pollen

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@limber pine
@dawn dew
@surreal apex
@arctic glacier
@stiff isle

ocean orbit
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THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FLARKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD

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THOSE FINAL THREE STANZAS!!!!!!!!!!!! SHEESH

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GOOSEFLIPPINGBUMPS

dark scroll
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secrets shall stay silent

ocean orbit
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"Like ghosts and dark – we’re close by heart.
Letters too detailed for the rest to bear witness…"

THIS FLIPPING MASTERPIECE

wide shell
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really feel like this is a moment in solidarity to all of us in here

ocean orbit
wide shell
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its the voice calling out and the lack of ears or rather lack of somebody listening to understand

limber pine
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Forbidden from speaking your name,
Uttering in flames as hums were chained…
Tongues enslaved and lungs were blazed;
I am numb from pain – but I succumbed in vain…

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the internal rhymes here

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AHAHAHHAHA

wide shell
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"So lord – answer my prayer…
Why is it that their presence wasn’t noticed by us?
Our closeness, our love,
Our hopes and our touch – was it not enough?"

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this is oceans deep

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and can i steal this (as in think about it for a week)

dark scroll
wide shell
queen compass
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Ok, good.

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I can sing it.

dark scroll
warm grove
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beautiful, as expected from a poet like you. love the flow on the second stanza!

dawn dew
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foggy moat
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poetica didnt ping me
heartbroken western leaving the server

candid riverBOT
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poetica didnt

ping me *heartbroken western

leaving the server*

- Western
dark scroll
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Forgive me, Mr. Western... bunnysad

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@foggy moat ( better late than never )

foggy moat
dark scroll
foggy moat
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wait wait gimme 10mins

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gotta look into shars poem

dark scroll
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Take your time, Western.

covert geyser
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Nice!

dawn dew
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This is wonderful

deep pebble
# dark scroll An endless outcry of confessions went unheard. Worlds apart yet close to heart. ...

it feels almost unjustified to call this one fascinating, but it honestly is
the topic is no doubt a dark one, and yet it was spoken about so graciously it lacks a blatant sense of despair
in a way, it’s almost like the poem is shielding its own truth from the world, or intending to at least
yet when looked at metaphorically, as is the nature with all your works, the true meaning comes out like a punch to the gut and it’s really quite impressive to see this tendency so consistent, and so fluid in each of your poems, yet vastly unique each time
your creativity truly knows no bounds and it’s something i strive to see in myself

rotund rock
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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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IT'S SO GOOD

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LOVE

surreal apex