#๐•พ๐–Ž๐–— ๐•ฌ. ๐•ฑ๐–—๐–Š๐–Š ๐•พ๐–™๐–ž๐–‘๐–Š

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teal vessel
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In Mein realm, a fire burns within me,
This rap defines who I am to be.
No one flees, You're locked in here with me.
Underestimated, I am dark, creating the night for you to love being blind.

They call me careless.
But my heart's a bullet, bursting with lines.
No apologies, just a storm of insults unleased,
Rhymes striking hard, leaving foes deceased.

My trippin' heart, wounded by desire,
Unyielding, I won't back down, won't tire.
No violence was needed, this battle was sharply cleaned,
But my sharp rhymes cut deep, fierce and keen.

In this grave, we dig, worms and rats in rows,
Who rises, who falls, time shall show.
Coffin me, in hell, we shall roam,
I'm the scorching breeze, blazing in the unknown.

Underestimate not, the power I possess,
With metaphors sharp, I leave you in distress.
This rap is my weapon, my voice,
To be reckoned with, forever my dark choice.

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@shadow pumice @low basin @mellow whale @wary stag

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@dapper mantle

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@hot pollen

This is only a series to your freestyle.

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@candid breach

shadow pumice
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Yayyy I'm tagged first

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The perfect vibe I go with

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Well written

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As usual

mellow whale
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ah yes

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another freestyle

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I need to put mine out next xD

hot pollen
candid breach
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Wow I LOVE IT!! Definitely to my freestyle haha. Every stanza every line is a cutting agonising moment of pain. I itโ€™s so emotionally powerful and satisfying to read. I also love the final stanza with rhyming couplets! Great job โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ

shadow pumice
dapper mantle
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