The End

[hidden atlas]

#1 puff fan noticing the new drops keke

[lean folio]

Awwwwww

[hidden atlas]

im guessing this piece was inspired by the most recent in #✍️・daily-prompts and honestly i feel like it depicts that theme beautifully

it’s super expressive and vivid, like a firm statement that needs to be expressed without the fog of over sentimentality
that’s not to say this piece is emotionless, far from it
it’s an extremely emotional piece
but it makes me think of something calm and solemn, as opposed to angry and brash

it’s extremely symbolic, and definitely not something that can be taken or understood on a literal or surface level take

it really does seem to speak towards the ‘end of the world’ whether or not that really is the world or simply someone’s own world

this speaks out to the slow collapse of a reality, playing, experiencing, or perhaps witnessing not only the different roles, but the different phases.
it really speaks out to a strong but desperate beginning, and ends with an almost hopeless conclusion

yet it also seems to speak of the fact that despite it has all ended, that doesn’t mean this hasn’t happened before. nor does it mean that it cannot start again

[lean folio]

You, Ikari, are one amazeful soul! I appreciate your analyzations, thoughts and comments soo soooo much! I feel so seen, heard and understood. I like how the literature always connects people. You have really fine skills in interpretations and depiction of your own authentic expression. Thank you for this one too, you get it. You get me.

[hidden atlas]

omg
i was honestly a little uncertain about what i drew from this one cause it seemed a little bit abstract / a stretch but im glad i was able to make you feel heard
this honestly might be one of my favorite pieces by you thus far— i love how much it made me think

it really got my gears turning in a way that was both fun and reflective

[lean folio]

Yeah it was pretty open ended and abstract, you were accurate about the expression in different ways. Aww thanks Ikari

[lean folio]

@brave coyote

[lean folio]

@halcyon scaffold
@mellow rapids
@lean folio
@peak halo
@lean folio

@errant crest Get it here after work!

@sand nova

[errant crest]

Bruh why does my company keep offering promotions when we are understaffed? (I already know the answer, but whhhhyyyyyyy?

[halcyon scaffold]

the speaker's position as the "middle" between the beginning and the end is a compelling metaphor for the transitional nature of human existence. its thrilling how the contrast between the beginning, which provides entertainment and comfort, and the middle, which is depicted as subtle and agonizing, suggests a dichotomy between the desire for familiarity and the need for growth. the portrayal of the end as a force that wraps up the mess and provides a new beginning adds a sense of closure to the poem.

anyway i think this poem is really thought provoking and well crafted. great work, im waiting to read more of your poems!!!!!

it took me a great deal of time to understand your poem metamorphically. but anyway, im really moved by this one 😭

[lean folio]

Ahh thank you so much Zeno!!! Your analyzations are pretty accurate indeed. Your interpretations are great and I'm glad you were make something out of this piece even if it took you long to understand :))

[halcyon scaffold]

:)))

[lean folio]

@slender bear

[slender bear]

I LOVE the associations with the theme and a stage

I haven't seen that done before, it's truly fascinating

And also compliments the theme beautifully

This is amazing, I also love the first stanza especially

"It's the end, you're the beginning, and the am the middle"

It's wonderful, great job! 😄

[lean folio]

Thank youuu again, this is certainly one of my favorite works of mine I'm glad you liked it :))

[lean folio]

@long meteor

[long meteor]

I might dose off if It is a deep one lol

[lean folio]

Lol then get sleep

[long meteor]

You too

[lean folio]

@shy kraken :))

[lean folio]

@tough ingot

[lean folio]

@lean folio

[lean folio]

aww, this is such a pretty poem!, loved how you used the words so smoothly..

[dawn island]

*aww, this is such a

pretty poem!, loved how you used

the words so smoothly..*

- Aly rose~

[lean folio]

Aww thanks a bunch Aly ❤️

[lean folio]

@white pollen

[lean folio]

@neat citrus

[neat citrus]

Okay puff I am officially your fan

[lean folio]

Babe 😭😭 I'll cry tonight It's been a while I wrote something love ya