#A Rico's poem

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river moth
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A poem about a poet
Verses about me
I already wrote about my tears in window to chaos
I already wrote about my losses in prison of flowers
I already wrote about my smiles on betting nights
I already wrote about my love in shine blue
Skies
But what about me?

Hello. My real name is Diego, I'm Brazilian, yes, the country of soccer, haha. Charisma and feelings are what move me to make you all smile, cry, and remember loves with my poems, the jokes in the chat, and the wonderful people I've met here. Perhaps destiny has united me with each one of you!

I've been through difficulties. I was born with congenital heart disease (hard to explain, but basically a flaw in heart gestation). I underwent two heart surgeries and today I'm fine and healthy. I have a lot to be thankful for, but even so, I continue to judge and criticize life. You know, I recently discovered that we, human beings, are never satisfied. The right to live that was given to me, I've thought about taking it away. Don't you dare think about such things. Life is so sweet, so beautiful, all you have to do is want to feel it. Feel the verses of your life being written. We are human and we all smile, we all cry, and perhaps we should confess to ourselves that we can feel, that we can make mistakes, that we can sin, that we can cry, that we can deal with it. There's nothing stronger than you. Feel your verses being written. Don't let yourself put an end to your life! I wanted to address this important issue because I've had similar thoughts, and recently I lost someone like that. So I want each of you to know: you are important, value yourselves like diamonds, love yourselves, and if in the end you feel alone, remember: "if no one offers you anything better than loneliness until the end of your life, be happy to live alone."

Finally, I would like to thank you. Thank you for the support you've given to my poems from the beginning, for the understanding and the affection. Thank you!

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@broken willow

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@sudden abyss

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@flint pecan

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@strange minnow

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@dawn patio

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@turbid radish

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@ember cairn

sudden abyss
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Woahhh this one seems interesting

river moth
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Really important...

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Not format

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Not rhymes and flow

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Only a theme to see

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@fleet ledge

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@pastel haven

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@sick egret

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@sick egret
@silk mural

ember cairn
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Rico….. you’re always gonna be the best for me.

river moth
ember cairn
river moth
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HAHAHAHAHA

river moth
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Put the gun down

ember cairn
river moth
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We need some of laughs

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After this

ember cairn
river moth
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@lyric python

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@normal forge

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@faint seal

broken willow
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make sure always take care of yourself and stay healthy

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I can tell you really wrote this from the bottom of your heart

river moth
flint pecan
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Rico... or Diego ( now that you have shared )

You've been the most electrifying person I've ever met that has ever held a pen.
I saw your vibrancy in the off-topic chat and was immediately charmed.
Your enthusiasm speaks loudly and that is evident in the poems you've shown.
In love with your Prison of Flowers trilogy; Part II was my favourite.

You often remind me of a bright young soul that was always inspired to do it.
Even when you yourself doubted your own skills - I among others have seen your colours.
After reading the poem/biographical introduction here.
I am saddened to know about your condition, but glad to see you keeping your head high.

There's a lot I wish I could do for you.
But this is all I could for the time being.
Thank you, Diego.

For all the poems you shared, conversations we had, and overall life to this server.

(Figured, I share my real name, too.)

-Rizq.

river moth
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Rizq!

ember cairn
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Rico, my guy (Diego),
I don’t know if you realise I enjoy your poems a lot too! The other day when I dropped criticism and you were sad about it I felt bad tbh, I really love the themes you write on and your style too. Maybe it’s just the AI translate which is biased but, I don’t care anymore. Idk why this is going emotional lmao, its not like me. But if you feel like anythings bad, know you have a friend to talk to.

Your dear friend,
Taufiq blanketpotat

silk mural
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Im not good with words but it’s an honor to be your friend

river moth
turbid radish
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My frosty tears, melt as I read this. You need a hug 🫂 Just Thank You.

normal forge
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this ain't a poem.

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it is good, but it is not a poem.

river moth
river moth
turbid radish
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Ya we do!!! After all he's a furry.

normal forge
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i can't review it.

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this is too personal for you.

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it is nice that you are good and all, keep it up. We have a good poet and a person in the server.

river moth
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This is a mensage for all of us

river moth
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@faint ice

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@delicate nebula

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@drifting summit

drifting summit
river moth
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Its important

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If you want see

drifting summit
river moth
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@sick egret

sudden abyss
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this poem definitely getting my best review, wait a min

river moth
river moth
sudden abyss
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i liked these phrases - prison of flower, betting nights, tears in window to chaos, it gives a visial effect to the readers and let them explaore the emotions youve expressed

this -

if no one offers you anything better than loneliness until the end of your life, be happy to live alone
this gotta be the best in the entire poem. it shows a potential feeling of being alone yet also gives an opportunity of self acceptance. self love

then this line too -

feel the verses of your life being written
its very impactfull. its like telling the readers to participate in their own journey

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the entire poem is amazing
it reminds people to cherish their life and embrace the ups and downs they may come across

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nice job man!

river moth
river moth
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@lusty moat

delicate nebula
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RIco this is beautiful

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Thank you for spreading such a message and I wish all the best for you now and in the future

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You really are an amazing poet

river moth
lusty moat
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OMG! you are a warrior, the most incredible person I know, with a vibrant and contagious energy, always in high spirits, I thank the universe for making our paths cross, and know that I will always be here when you need me.

river moth
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@desert dagger

desert dagger
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youve been an incredible fighter and you here here right now on this earth, its given you the dirt which you are made from. Find peace, and through this find the best version if yourself (: i loved reading this

river moth
river moth
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@sick egret

sick egret
river moth
river moth
sick egret
faint ice
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"if no one offers you anything better than loneliness until the end of your life, be happy to live alone" I'm keeping that in my notes

im a sucker for rhymes but this one i can feel the emotions
good to know you btw