Foxglove my love | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

charred sierra May 9, 2024, 5:05 AM

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It's a lil low quality lol

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@plucky lava
@rugged marsh
@last trout

rugged marsh May 9, 2024, 5:09 AM

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Damn, I love the rhymes and the word play in the poem. The two last stanzas is my favorite.

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The way you phrase in your poem makes me interpret this as a toxic relationship, at first seemed like a normal love relationship. Although through time it reveals it's true colors, one loves and the other doesn't reciprocate and rather the opposite.

charred sierra May 9, 2024, 5:13 AM

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rugged marsh The way you phrase in your poem makes me interpret this as a toxic relationship,...

Thank you so much 😭🙏

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@broken portal

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@desert depot

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I showed my friend and he rated it emo/10 (╬▔皿▔)╯

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(╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻

charred sierra May 9, 2024, 5:47 AM

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HOW DID I ALMOST FORGET MY SONG POOKIE

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@granite yarrow

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my bookie

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where is she

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@golden walrus

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@pale rain Time for business

pale rain May 9, 2024, 5:58 AM

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It flows well and good use of language features, however the flow is a bit interrupted in the 3rd and 4th line of stanza 3, overall good poem though

charred sierra May 9, 2024, 5:59 AM

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ooh thank you for the feedback

pale rain May 9, 2024, 5:59 AM

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charred sierra ooh thank you for the feedback

Anytime

#Foxglove my love