#A poets Muse

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gloomy leaf
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How's it <@&1145760802666717234>

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And @rotund raptor, @odd rain @blazing vessel @restive shore

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@main reef @honest minnow @crude idol

rotund raptor
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This is pretty good ngl, some errors here and there but I’m not here to nitpick. I love the metaphors used here, and the spacing is also pretty unique. 7/10

blazing stag
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This poem, it's cute 🥺🤍

odd rain
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@gloomy leaf really be mooning with this poem here.

gloomy leaf
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Not my best one but wrote this after a long time so not very upto the mark but open to appreciation and corrections

bold martenBOT
gloomy leaf
rotund raptor
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Np

gloomy leaf
odd rain
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Ayo necko don't you think that everyone of us was just as humble as this dude right here but then we all sipped some tea and here we are.

rotund raptor
gloomy leaf
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By the way @odd rain read your poem her. Was a piece of art, loved it.

odd rain
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You know hindi?

gloomy leaf
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Yes I do

rotund raptor
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@gloomy leaf you should read my poem

odd rain
rotund raptor
gloomy leaf
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Bhai Hindi aati hai bohot ache se I think this is enough as a proof

gloomy leaf
rotund raptor
gloomy leaf
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Jeiseke

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Kya batau

rotund raptor
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Failed!

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Imposter

gloomy leaf
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It was very good well written and the shah jaha reference was a chefs kiss

gloomy leaf
gloomy leaf
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But I speak as fluently as a native speaker so no difference

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I have lot of Hindi speaking friends so that explains

odd rain
gloomy leaf
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And "my Jaan"melted my heart the mix of Hindi was amazing

odd rain
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@rotund raptor

odd rain
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about the song?

gloomy leaf
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Did not listen

odd rain
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re-read it with the song, it's hella fine.

gloomy leaf
gloomy leaf
odd rain
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ek, do, teen ya chaar?

gloomy leaf
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Bhai wo neeko ko poocho mujhe keise pata hoga

odd rain
gloomy leaf
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Nahi bhai tumhi bata do

odd rain
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infinity

gloomy leaf
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😂

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Lol

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So perfect let me guess your age

odd rain
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Hindi mein bataiyo

gloomy leaf
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Above 20?

odd rain
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aapki?

gloomy leaf
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17

odd rain
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NO SH!t

gloomy leaf
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Yess

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By the way what are your career aspirations

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Like what are you going to pursue

odd rain
odd rain
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about you?

gloomy leaf
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Have PCB preparing for NEET

odd rain
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cause I am

gloomy leaf
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Yes

odd rain
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When you become a doc please give me free OPDs.

gloomy leaf
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Haha never

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Just kidding ofc

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So what's the status of your prep like will you need a drop?

odd rain
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Nah, I'ma ace it.

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even though haven't studied for like 3 months now

gloomy leaf
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Whattt 3months dude

gloomy leaf
odd rain
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Took a break

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Had too much going on

gloomy leaf
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Well the break was too long

odd rain
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I'ma get in the zone real soon

gloomy leaf
gloomy leaf
odd rain
gloomy leaf
bold martenBOT
odd rain
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Hey can I call you 'ma moon' cause it just sounds super sweet bro.

gloomy leaf
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Sure bro🎀

odd rain
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Thanks ma moon.

gloomy leaf
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Your welcome purr-fect

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Just wanted to do it don't ask why

odd rain
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Any speciality you wanna pursue?

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Like Neurologist or something?

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Bruh nice

blazing vessel
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moon wow what a name u have chosen