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echo ferry May 3, 2024, 11:36 AM

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Okay then

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This was…. Unique

granite mica May 3, 2024, 11:37 AM

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you got feedback?

echo ferry May 3, 2024, 11:37 AM

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Its nice, a few spelling mistakes

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Grammatical errors, none that I can see of

granite mica May 3, 2024, 11:38 AM

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wer was on purpose

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shoood also

echo ferry May 3, 2024, 11:38 AM

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Your vocabulary is quite unique

echo ferry May 3, 2024, 11:38 AM

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granite mica shoood also

I was talking about “vien”

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Is it a language thing?

granite mica May 3, 2024, 11:39 AM

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nuh i missed that

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continue

echo ferry May 3, 2024, 11:39 AM

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Formatting, a-ok

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Theme is vibing and vivid

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This sure is very good

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8/10

granite mica May 3, 2024, 11:40 AM

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hey thanks, any bits you suggest that could do me well in future poems

tawny mapleBOT May 3, 2024, 11:40 AM

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*hey thanks, any bits

you suggest that could do me

well in future poems*

echo ferry May 3, 2024, 11:41 AM

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granite mica hey thanks, any bits you suggest that could do me well in future poems

Not a lot to be honest, haven’t seen much like this EVER

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As I said it was unique

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Ah yes, Be unique.

granite mica May 3, 2024, 11:42 AM

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i mainly got style from william s burroughs and from other unreltated poem stuff

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arthur rimbaud also

echo ferry May 3, 2024, 11:42 AM

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I see

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I don’t read much poetry

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Only my works

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