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fiery parcel May 2, 2024, 7:46 PM

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@elfin escarp

fiery parcel May 3, 2024, 6:48 AM

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@fiery parcel

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Taming me as Shepard to a flock
Your breath becomes song
Beating the drums of my soul
Darling star,
You own my heart, skin, and whole.

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this madam hits deep

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yup another one of my proud stanzas

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😭

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I like how uve kept it straight to the point. No wandering about, no heavy vocabulary. I also liked the flow

fiery parcel May 3, 2024, 6:50 AM

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ashen flintBOT May 3, 2024, 6:50 AM

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Wonderful! @fiery parcel has just pregressed to level 3!

fiery parcel May 3, 2024, 6:51 AM

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this was my first official poem

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