Zindagi

[maiden fog]

❤️

Beautifully written

@terse knoll

[steel hinge]

You remember the rule of if non English languages are used then there should be translation provided?

I'm willing to critique but I don't think this poem being here is abiding by the rules

[terse knoll]

I will add translation

[terse knoll]

Should I delete the poem if it's against the rules ?

[steel hinge]

It is

[terse knoll]

Okay I will delete it : )

[steel hinge]

I think it's better to not upload this cuz we are allowing the translation exception only for conversation purposes

Otherwise it's strict for non English languages

[terse knoll]

Can you directly tell should I delete it or not ?

Please

[steel hinge]

Well, according to the rules, yes

[terse knoll]

Done

[steel hinge]

Thanks

[terse knoll]

Thanks : )

[maiden fog]

Man use your coding for good

[red shuttle]

Even though I know only a bit of hindi. It was a bit challenging to understand the whole thing but how much I enjoyed it when you pointed out differents path and shades of life. Both happiness and sadness🕊️💫. @terse knoll

[maiden fog]

Provide a translation

[red shuttle]

✨

[maiden fog]

You didn't have to delete it

[steel hinge]

He did

[red shuttle]

Nicely written @terse knoll

[terse knoll]

He said to delete

[pale vortex]

guys

[maiden fog]

@terse knoll
You listening me bro

[steel hinge]

The translations are for the sake of conversations only

[pale vortex]

i didn't get to read it

[terse knoll]

@maiden fog

[steel hinge]

He can dm y'all yk

Me too btw

[pale vortex]

yea mb 😭

[maiden fog]

He said translation allowed

[steel hinge]

I'm an urdu and hindi poetry enthusiast

[steel hinge]

For sake of conversations

If you're getting the point

[maiden fog]

My bad @steel hinge

[terse knoll]

My poem was mix of it

[maiden fog]

Yes I get it sir

[maiden fog]

Okie

[steel hinge]

Good now I'll be reviewing poems so if anything arises, @ me

[maiden fog]

Sure

Good luck with it

[steel hinge]

👍🏼

[terse knoll]

Thanks ummm

[terse knoll]

Though it was mix of urdu and Hindi

[onyx zealot]

Bro send me the poem , I wanna read it

[maiden fog]

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