#The Space Resort (I)

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zenith crow
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Once in a blue moon, a place of rest and comfort would pop up.
The lunar surface now holding a futuristic resort.
Something out of a sci-fi dream; a retro retrospective.
Everyone's welcomed in this Las Vegas styled lavish hotel!

A revolving satellite on a revolving satellite,
Both spins takes a month to complete under the bright, bright sunlight!
Sits right in the Mare Tranquillitatis, neighbouring Sea of Serenity,
Really holds that panoramic view of craters and the bright vast interstellar!

Easy to check in, fairly difficult on leaving.
Simply, it's the one and only around the Selene.
But when that Grandfather Clock hits the double o's;
Our personal metro's arrived in no slow!

Most eccentric attractions waits left on the shiny B-side:
From space walking, gambling, and the first ever rovers flipping!
Rooms? Coming in hot with different sized beds and suites,
All service for your black or white bags and sheets!

Our Moon Base, a well reviewed five stars out five.
As remarkable as the rain, as sharp as a knife.
Come on in, the atmosphere's lovely and here.
Here - in this multiplex tourists interest!

limpid turret
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this reads like. a futuristic ad, which is fairly amusing and pleasant to read. although i think the language could be more concise, the flow is excellent. i am curious to learn more about the revolving satellites, and i'm having some trouble picturing what they look like entangled together, so more imagery can help with your poem. but all in all i love the concepts you have presented here! thank you for writing and sharing this

zenith crow
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I guess since this is a hotel on a moon (far from society), I wasn't really detailing it much so it shows that mysterious and mystical vibes in it

zenith crow
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@mortal magnet

minor girder
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.np