A LOVE LETTER TO LOVE💌

[ionic spruce]

@naive nest
@jolly sierra
@mighty rampart
@graceful orbit
@granite rapids

@bleak chasm
@honest dirge
@tame mirage
@honest dirge

@thick thistle

@mental willow
@civic bobcat
@fading iris
@candid storm
@fading iris

[naive nest]

I love you as a friend
I love you till dead end
~
Aww these lines🤭

[ionic spruce]

hehehe

[honest dirge]

Tagged twice, honoured very much. The wording here is quite limited, but it much suits the poems caliber. “I love love” is something that I wrote a poem on about a week ago too so personally i’m loving it. Quite unique read in a while, but the overall theme is quite shallow. 7/10 for the effort.
With love, Toffee

[ionic spruce]

thanks for the honesty

[mental willow]

interesting.

[ionic spruce]

thanks

[narrow grail]

Wonderful! @ionic spruce has just pregressed to level 8!

[graceful orbit]

"And I love love."
What a melody.

[ionic spruce]

i wish @graceful orbit was here, he would have said something like "and i love love what a melody"
and i would have said thanks

too bad

[graceful orbit]

I wish if @ionic spruce was here she would've reacted to my compliment, what a waste.

[ionic spruce]

brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

[fading iris]

"the notion that love is scary"
"because love is love and I love love"
Hits hard
Second stanza was an emotional ride tbh

[ionic spruce]

IKR thanks

[mighty rampart]

woah I liked the repetition of "I love you" with different interpretations, it adds a lot more depth to the poem and also gives some feeling like thing that love is not one dimentinal but rather a full spectrum of feelings and stuff.

well written i like it!!

[ionic spruce]

uhh thank you best response so far not because it's a positive response
because u got my point that I was trying to explain the different forms of love

[mighty rampart]

had to read it 3 times

[ionic spruce]

😭🤝 so sweet of u

[fading iris]

this is soo cutee~ gives me ravi singh's vibes from agggtm

[ionic spruce]

im on the second book

have u read the whole series?

[fading iris]

yes

[fading iris]

keep goinggg dont stoppppp!!

[ionic spruce]

yea ik so engaging

[fading iris]

absolutely~

[tame mirage]

The notion that love is scary
Which is true and wary

Might just be me, but wary dosent fit well with the tone of them poem. Other than that, it's one of the better poems I've read all week.

[graceful orbit]

@ionic spruce Man if keed was here, she would've said something like, 'I know but I just thought to put the right notion of what love is and not to just manipulate the words to fit to rhyme. Thank you for your feedback tho.'

[tame mirage]

Whatever

[ionic spruce]

thanks

[ionic spruce]

what are you? my spokes person now

[candid storm]

Personally I'd also add something about I love you also being a choice rather than just an emotion. But up to you.

[narrow grail]

Wonderful! @candid storm has just pregressed to level 5!

[graceful orbit]

@ionic spruce Man I wish she was here and I wish she wishes me to be her spokes-person. (I'll deny.)

[ionic spruce]

haha

[ionic spruce]

@fading iris this one too hehe

[fading iris]

I read it few minutes after you posted it
It's a lovely poem
"I'll love you till dead end"
This reminded me of something
Pretty impactful
It's just that people already made such lovely comments I thought there was nothing left to say

You leave ppl speechless keed

[ionic spruce]

omg thank you so much
mb i forgot to tag you

[fading iris]

No problem
But we interacted last night only
So technically you didn't

[ionic spruce]

did we omg my brain's not braining properly 😭

[fading iris]

You are super cool
To accept ppl so much
That conversation feels like it was going for an eternity
Not to blame you

Also I was feeling a lil low about myself
Thanks for tagging me in poems

It was refreshing

[ionic spruce]

why are you so sweet

[ionic spruce]

wait I have something for you

what if you think you are drowning
but in fact you are the water
that shimmers
when the sun shines above you
and you think the waves are here to take you
but you need to understand
that waves are one that makes you
makes you look so beautiful to look at
that people watch with delighted eyes
and you become a hopeful sight
for those
who are about to give up
for those
who have hopes to live up
that someday they will reach the shore
without drowning in the water
that they actually belonged to before

[fading iris]

Coz I am very emotional I can't take people being rude to me I get depressed
You don't treat ppl the way you don't want to be treated

But things apart your are actually sweet

[ionic spruce]

us🫂

[fading iris]

Wow
Pretty practical yet so heavenly
Rises my spirit
Thanks
It's lovely

[ionic spruce]

thenks

[naive nest]

@ionic spruce @graceful orbit

Its pretty bad but-

I tried

[ionic spruce]

omg 😭 stop

[graceful orbit]

WTF

[naive nest]

@ionic spruce I'd like to apologize to you. When I finished yours my phone decided to drop the quality from 740p to 140p

So sorry. I'll make you another one

[graceful orbit]

@naive nest Doubles your daily wage.

[graceful orbit]

Your phone knows the priority.

But why the heck is there red thing over there

*Cuts your wage

[ionic spruce]

nobody made me anything like that before thank u (fcuk quality who cares effort matters)♡

[graceful orbit]

@honest dirge @jolly sierra

[naive nest]

Tongue. I made you cute

[graceful orbit]

*increase your wage significantly

[naive nest]

No really. I mean it... Also the red lightening is coming from the baloon of yours. Hehe

[jolly sierra]

Huh ?

[honest dirge]

Bro what are you doing

[graceful orbit]

Necko don't get the wrong idea bro

This is not what it looks like

[honest dirge]

[graceful orbit]

*sips tea hurridly

[ionic spruce]

yea balloon i see

[honest dirge]

119, don’t tell me your emergency

Perfect be on too much tea

[naive nest]

Glad you guys liked it

[jolly sierra]

You became stafff ? How the heck ????????

[honest dirge]

i am THE ONE

I’ll be judging this event

[jolly sierra]

I thought your were just a TEA DRINKER .... A COMMON PERSON WHO GETS HIGH ON TEA

[ionic spruce]

ofc we would 🤡

[honest dirge]

I AM THO

[bleak chasm]

@graceful orbit

I have came from my preparation for Chess.

[graceful orbit]

Who the hell are you?

[honest dirge]

After Perfect, i’m the highest in the room

https://tenor.com/view/y3ongi-asap-gif-21033183

[bleak chasm]

A

[graceful orbit]

You a letter?

[bleak chasm]

This is my name.

[jolly sierra]

Lol I am district level chess player

[honest dirge]

A letter

[graceful orbit]

Ok. But who are you?

[jolly sierra]

I WILL NOT GIVE TEA TO YOU FROM NOW

[ionic spruce]

a love letter to love 💌

[graceful orbit]

Same man. I beat my school once.

[honest dirge]

Perfect, and Poetica share me enough tea anyway

[bleak chasm]

I was an upcoming Fide Master.🫡

[graceful orbit]

I am the letter. (Talking to the voices in his head)

[jolly sierra]

They don't make that much good tea as I make

[graceful orbit]

*throws tea at you homie

[jolly sierra]

Xd

[honest dirge]

If perfect was here, he’d say some random stuff

[honest dirge]

munches raw

[bleak chasm]

?

[jolly sierra]

Lol I play in district level competitions like DSOs

[graceful orbit]

I am
but
EVERYWHERE.

[jolly sierra]

Hahaha

[jolly sierra]

Though looking really nice

[naive nest]

https://tenor.com/view/thankyou-aliceinwonderland-thanks-gif-7160144793394838514

[ionic spruce]

@warped flare

[warped flare]

"Because love is love
And i love love"
Só lovely!

[ionic spruce]

thanks

[ionic spruce]

@coral adder

[coral adder]

The many definitions of love you gave here is really nice to see.
Stanza two in particular is really descriptive in its mission.

Really well-done.

[ionic spruce]

thanks

[thick thistle]

Love poems, as always, hard to review, tho let's try, first of all, the vocabulary is pretty much casual, not too much going on there, rhymes? I'd say that's absent tho the repetition makes up for it, them comes structure, the poem lacks structure imo so revise that part, then comes the imageries, they're not that good, I'd say okay okay-ish, then let's talk about metaphors, they're unavailable, poem is a bit shallow, work on that part, then comes the overall feel, I think the poem holds potential but needs lots of work and revision to be a good poem, overall I'd give this a 6/10