#"our last chapter"
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5 @ is the limit
@sand ember
@naive siren
@dire solar
@covert vale
@patent phoenix
@simple willow
@swift flax
@worldly trail
@lofty raft
Still keeping those flowers close to you?.. Isn't it a torture though?
jus because it ended doesn't mean it wasn't beautiful
@sinful raptor
Your poem truly touched my heart. As I read through the lines, I could feel the emotions of each word. The way you question where to begin, whether with the first meeting of your eyes or the collision of your bodies, showcases the complexity of your relationship. It's evidence that this is not a happy ending you've chosen, and you're no longer pretending that the person you're writing about will ever be yours. The moments you shared, like the gliding of your hands and the flower they gave you, hold a special place in your heart, even though you've come to realize that feelings should be confessed, not suppressed.
🫂
thank you im glad u liked it
@wanton beacon
@quick monolith
@errant rune
@tulip magnet
@modern pumice
@simple salmon
This girl went from "I'm sad" to "Faq you; your lose." real quick.
If I had a romantic side in me; I would've definitely wrote something similar to the beginning of this poem; although very rough piece of work you presented but I had fun cause yk,
Kehte hai na: Dudh chahe kitna bhi safed ho... log to chai ke hi diwaane hote hai.
(Not matter how much whiter the milk is, people always run after tea.)
So I really enjoyed the piece.
I loved it
yea I mean it's his loss anyways
chai>>>>>>>>
hehe thanks
adrak waali (with ginger)
ugh ofccccc
I was trying to add tulsi but instead added dhaniya/pudina idk what it was
Goes to show how bad I am in the kitchen
who the fcuk puts dhaniya/pudina in chai
😭😭
so u admit that u r bad at some things
Because I'm not trying to be good at them.
Duhh
I can't be bad at anything.
I'm Perfect.
means u r not perfect
"I'm not trying." It's a sujective thing you cretin.
cough dhaniya pudina Tulsi tell the difference cough
They are all green.
Ha
Take that!
I know so much
*such a smarty
talk to me when put them in ur chai again
Wonderful! @sinful raptor has just pregressed to level 5!
That's the spirit💫. One of my friends is going through the same situation but she doesn't think like you. I'll send this poetry to her. Can I? 🕊️
ofc why not
I like my tea without sugar doesn't matter what's in it, tulsi, dhaniya, hennessy. I'll take them all.
oh now I get it u r high on Hennessy
tulsi
dhaniya
I'm not high on Hennessy
pudina
I am Hennessy.
lol
@tawdry cradle
People are high on me.
huh i would like to pass
bye bye Hennessy
oh I'm sworryy i forgot ur name was dhaniya pudina @quick monolith
This is not a diss, but cringe.
u r free to cringe on urself mate
it's okay
Bruh I'm disappointed in you.
You could've done better.
I mean cmon
You both are funny🤭
even U-ummm could diss me better than you
My honest reaction:
Where are you?
You wear suit and tie at home....
I even wear it while taking showers.
Don't think so low of me.
Terrifying.
*runs
What would you do now keed
don't be a hypocrite when u r the actual disappointment here
Your only supporter has abandoned you.
dhaniya/pudina
haha 🫂
I feed bad for @mint harbor. You put her name in dirt.
No she didn't. She's cool. So are you
so cool that he wears suit and tie to shower
i bet he stinks
Lets not get into that
. Otherwise tomorrow he'll write something about you that you'd never forget
Btw, is this one your first writing?
someone said the same thing to me yesterday
mhm
u mean here?
Awh I was hoping you had more. Wanted to read...
wait a sec
U-Ummm's like not matter what side wins, I always win.
bn meaning?
typo
I didn't sign up for this. When did I became your spokesperson?
*I didn't sign up
for this. When did I became
your spokesperson?*
too bad for you i respect her more than you
Eww bot remove it
You don't have a choice.
We gonna be famous.
he is just delusional
let him be
okay guys chill
Ayo @stoic star Long time no see man!
been a little bit busy sadly
How so? Doin good?
Yeah, im out rn so aint able to give much time to dc
understandable bruh.
Hope everything's okay.
Yup!
Come back strong with a poem kay.
wait who puts dhaniya in tea 💀
i have yours to review first
I have high standards.
Very.
Very High Standards.
My mate remembers! Enough to make me happy bro.
haha
woah okay
exactly!! dumb ppl
Just finished reading those two. Both are beautiful. Are you selenophile?
umm i won't say that I am more of a sky person whether it's day or night
i love this song
thanks tho
@lofty raft
yes?
nvm I am dumb I will review lol
yea that's why I pinged u
Genuinely made me cry
im glad
not about that u cried
but u liked it lol
@spare lark
"The flower you gave me merrily"
Damn a little tear drop from my eyes you are a really Nice writer...
All this feelings i can relate and looks só cruel godamn
haha thanks
@quick monolith Why do you have a picture of me?
@quick monolith
@quick monolith
"the feelings are meant to be confessed
and not to be suppressed"
Damn
I'd say most of the people forget it
How did is miss this masterpiece?
*Claps in appreciation
thanks