#poem surgery

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night oak
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I need help finishing this poem. I got too caught up in the rhyming.

"Ago Now After"
Lately these days happiness seems to just slip away.
Joy a long lost hope. Joy turned to Jaded memories
Where did they go?
Where did that boy go?
The boy filled with joy; became a man lost amongst the sand
Time slips away like an hourglass running empty.
Happiness now is just a memory.
Just like the boy lost in his pain.
Only scars did the man gain.
Now I can't complain of the pain
There was

ebon sentinel
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In days gone by, happiness did stray, Joy, now a distant dream, fades away. Where did it vanish, where did it flee? That boy, once brimming with glee?Time, like sand through an hourglass, slips away, Leaving behind memories, colors turned gray. Happiness now but a whisper of the past, The boy's laughter silenced, shadows cast.From joyful youth to a man in pain, Lost amidst life's desert, where dreams wane. Scars adorn the soul, like badges worn, Yet, in the silence, a heart torn.No longer can I lament the pain, For time's relentless march, no refrain. But in the echoes of what's been lost, Resides the wisdom, at a great cost. Good enough?

night oak
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You made me 😭

ebon sentinel
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Im glad to hear

night oak
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Can we please be friends you really get me 😢