sky

[elder cipher]

@brazen fiber
@inner imp
@storm sandal
@brazen fiber

[brazen fiber]

Coming from a science background it was pretty off for me to compare
As some thoughts kicked in

But the use of metaphor is quite fine
I would say
My favourite was the last stanza

[elder cipher]

thanks I'm a science student too lol the thought behind this was a therapist frnd who is always there of other frnds so it's kinda off science maybe idk

[storm sandal]

@elder cipher So pretty! And also a pretty good depiction of what I’ve been struggling with as of late. I love your metaphor.

The last line “even it is a falling star” kinda threw me off, but I think I understand what you mean, basically that no matter what you are, there’s that constant struggle we all deal with.

There may be a typo at the beginning though, it says “does the moon cries?”

Nonetheless, beautiful poem! It was exactly what I needed to read today! Thank you!

[elder cipher]

typos are going to be the death of me one day thanks tho

[brazen fiber]

Yeah
I was wondering what inspired you to write this
We all deserve that one friend

[elder cipher]

yea everybody does

[elder cipher]

thanks @inner imp

[quartz walrus]

Maybe I like it more because I like looking at the sky for hours. Specially night sky⭐

You described your thoughts so well🌹

[elder cipher]

thenks

[elder cipher]

@zealous forge u r obviously free check this out

[zealous forge]

Man I wonder what kind of an image @elder cipher has of me in her mind.

[elder cipher]

haha don't you know the answer

[zealous forge]

The sky telling another sky to be a sky, pretty ironic.

[elder cipher]

huh?

[zealous forge]

@elder cipher I know she would'nt have understood my compliment cause if she did then she wouldn't be keed

That rhymed

[elder cipher]

bruh

[zealous forge]

@elder cipher I wish she just comes forward and apologises so that I could take back my for-father's attack back created by Ching jao Jing Ming Ding Dhaniya Pudding Li ren Jung.

[elder cipher]

haha apologise u wish haha

[zealous forge]

@elder cipher Man I wonder where she went, such a nice granny... heavenly sent!!

That too rhymed

I wish she was here to read this.

[elder cipher]

don't granny me oki

🔪die

[zealous forge]

@elder cipher Man she was never the type to take compliments, what a mature granny...

[elder cipher]

shhh go away

[elder cipher]

@daring plinth

[daring plinth]

Oooow thats really good the repetion have the charm

Ow ow

[elder cipher]

thanks man