Gods fall.. | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

chrome magnet Apr 27, 2024, 7:58 AM

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One of my favorite poems.. and one of my first i wrote as a 16 y/0

Time marches by,
forever and ever,
ending memories,
in its amorphous form.

wandering for purpose,
when touched by time,
reduced to hollow,
ceasing to exist.

new entities appear, unaware of the march,
blooming to prosperity,
since others have long gone,
and much time has past.

but the march ruins and crumbles
as it has spared none.
and takes everyone aghast

Civilizations rise, and they fall,
escaping time, forgotten eventually,
once and for all.

heaven and hell,
set ablaze
the march continues
wrecking those who chase.

atop mountains high and distant valleys,
reduced to fine sand,
guides one that seeks answers,
in this once thriving land.

everything shall go,
eternal truth shall remain,
time takes it all and in the end,
even gods fall.

vital knot Apr 27, 2024, 8:57 AM

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You wrote this when you were 16?!

chrome magnet Apr 27, 2024, 9:51 AM

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yes

earnest saffron Apr 27, 2024, 10:55 AM

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chrome magnet One of my favorite poems.. and one of my first i wrote as a 16 y/0 Time marche...

You should see the stuff I wrote as 16 (i am 16), lovely. The theme is so good, also the imagery is very nice. Glad it’s your favourite blanketpotat
7/10, epic.
With love, Toffee Wave

chrome magnet Apr 27, 2024, 10:56 AM

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earnest saffron You should see the stuff I wrote as 16 (i am 16), lovely. The theme is so good, ...

😮

earnest saffron Apr 27, 2024, 10:56 AM

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chrome magnet 😮

Wanna see my stuff?

chrome magnet Apr 27, 2024, 10:56 AM

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yea sure

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im new into all this so yeaa

chrome magnet Apr 27, 2024, 1:49 PM

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earnest saffron Wanna see my stuff?

i read ur name as narcotics 😄

dense estuaryBOT Apr 27, 2024, 1:49 PM

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chrome magnet i read ur name as narcotics 😄

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earnest saffron Apr 27, 2024, 2:13 PM

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chrome magnet i read ur name as narcotics 😄

It was intentional COFFEEEow

chrome magnet Apr 27, 2024, 5:00 PM

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earnest saffron It was intentional <:COFFEEEow:1171503283966312641>

EzraPeaking

chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:31 PM

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@carmine skiff

carmine skiff Apr 30, 2024, 5:32 PM

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My fav part:
new entities appear, unaware of the march,
blooming to prosperity,
since others have long gone,
and much time has past.

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To the one I personally related to: everything shall go,
eternal truth shall remain,
time takes it all and in the end,
even gods fall.

carmine skiff Apr 30, 2024, 5:32 PM

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chrome magnet <@760850102729834549>

Really a great one Canny

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Although I would suggest you to use a different pic.

chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:33 PM

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carmine skiff To the one I personally related to: everything shall go, eternal truth shall r...

thank you

chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:33 PM

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carmine skiff Although I would suggest you to use a different pic.

yea i thought so

carmine skiff Apr 30, 2024, 5:33 PM

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Like this one?

chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:33 PM

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i was not getting the 1 i wanted

chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:33 PM

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carmine skiff Like this one?

is it sfw?

carmine skiff Apr 30, 2024, 5:33 PM

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Yes

chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:33 PM

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Wah man
"Civilisations rise and they fall, escaping time, forgotten eventually once and for all"
Noice

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carmine skiff Apr 30, 2024, 5:34 PM

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@chrome magnet Write a line and I'll finish it just to show you the vibe that I wish for you to write.

chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:34 PM

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carmine skiff Apr 30, 2024, 5:35 PM

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chrome magnet

Too many details brother. Too.. too many details.

carmine skiff Apr 30, 2024, 5:35 PM

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chrome magnet

Same.

chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:35 PM

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chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:36 PM

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carmine skiff <@456226577798135808> Write a line and I'll finish it just to show you the vibe ...

sry i didnt get u

carmine skiff Apr 30, 2024, 5:36 PM

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chrome magnet sry i didnt get u

Just write a line

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Anything you feel like that could be turned into a poetry

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It'll give you a hint on how to proceed

chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:36 PM

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kk

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in strong wind and heavy rain,
he guides his way through ancient remains.

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sry man poetry f'ed up

carmine skiff Apr 30, 2024, 5:41 PM

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This is good enough (better than I expected )

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lemme show you

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in strong wind and heavy rain,
he guides his way through ancient remains.
For he of all;
The one to never befall,
Is the patron saint of your demise my dear...
'He is the fallen' or so the realms call him,
'For he is our father' still cries domains.

chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:43 PM

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carmine skiff in strong wind and heavy rain, he guides his way through ancient remains. For h...

blursob only if i cud write lyk this

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i could never

carmine skiff Apr 30, 2024, 5:43 PM

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Bruh

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Don't disappoint me by giving up.

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I have faith in you brother.

chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:44 PM

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carmine skiff I have faith in you brother.

thanks a lot man

carmine skiff Apr 30, 2024, 5:44 PM

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A day might come when you may surpass me.

chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:44 PM

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i showed this poem to my father

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he said did u use chat gpt

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catstare blursob

carmine skiff Apr 30, 2024, 5:44 PM

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chrome magnet he said did u use chat gpt

I didn't lol

chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:44 PM

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no

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not urs

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mine

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gods fall one

chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:46 PM

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carmine skiff A day might come when you may surpass me.

nah man.. u have a talent.. mine is a hobby

dense estuaryBOT Apr 30, 2024, 5:46 PM

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chrome magnet nah man.. u have a talent.. mine is a hobby

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chrome magnet Apr 30, 2024, 5:46 PM

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by any chance @carmine skiff are u indian (saw ur shah jahan reference)

carmine skiff Apr 30, 2024, 5:51 PM

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chrome magnet by any chance <@760850102729834549> are u indian (saw ur shah jahan reference)

I am

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and you?

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chrome magnet May 1, 2024, 5:15 AM

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carmine skiff I am

yes im too

chrome magnet May 1, 2024, 5:16 AM

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carmine skiff

wat website

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i never doubted u bruv chill

chrome magnet May 3, 2024, 6:53 AM

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chrome magnet One of my favorite poems.. and one of my first i wrote as a 16 y/0 Time marche...

phew another one of these existential poems i’m so intrigued by them and you make it 100x more interesting woww. really loved this one, and you were 16?? that’s huge! I rarely wrote when I was 16, so this is so cool to see

dense estuaryBOT May 3, 2024, 6:53 AM

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chrome magnet phew another one of these existential poems i’m so intrigued by them and you mak...

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chrome magnet May 3, 2024, 6:53 AM

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chrome magnet phew another one of these existential poems i’m so intrigued by them and you mak...

i am still 16

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OH LOL

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i mean yea almost 17

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i’m 18, i started writing more seriously when i was 17 though!

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english is not my 1st language so its hard to find them words lol

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again my fav stanzas are the last couple, something about the conclusions really draw me in

chrome magnet May 3, 2024, 6:54 AM

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chrome magnet i’m 18, i started writing more seriously when i was 17 though!

i initially wrote articles (i still do).. later i switched to poems

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that makes sense i can’t wait to read your future poems!

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mind checking out one final one??

chrome magnet May 3, 2024, 6:56 AM

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chrome magnet that makes sense i can’t wait to read your future poems!

thank you!

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chrome magnet May 3, 2024, 6:56 AM

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chrome magnet mind checking out one final one??

yea shoot.. i love ur poems

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np!!

#Gods fall..