pebble in your shoe

[tough spruce]

A pebble can feel like a boulder if it’s stuck in your shoe all day
And im sitting here wondering why you make me feel this way
Why I feel like a boulder so big and in your way
When im a pebble im placid and sway.

I wish you understood me I wish you listened more
don’t you get that I love you it’s you who I adore
you think it’s too much but I keep giving more and more

A boulder in your shoe would certainly make you sore, so why do you act like talking to me is some great big chore?

[hidden pond]

You could break down the 2nd stanza into multiple verses. Other than that, I love everything about the poem.
9/10 stuff.

[plush pasture]

10/10 relatable and beautifully worded

[feral shale]

I have a feeling that you could make the poem feel more like a "peeble in your shoe" if you continued what you started in the first few lines

It would give it a little caesura, like how your day and mood gets off track

A pebble can feel like a boulder if it’s stuck in your shoe all day
And im sitting here wondering why you make me feel this way
Why I feel like a boulder so big
and in your way
When im a pebble im placid
and sway.

I wish you understood me I wish you listened more
don’t you get that I love you it’s you who I adore
you think it’s too much but I keep giving more and more

A boulder in your shoe would certainly make you sore
so why do you act like

Talking to me is some great big chore?

Also I feel if the last line is like split off from the last para it has more affect

I'm sorry if I'm overstepping by proposing these changes
I'm new here and not sure what the etiquette is for everything

[tough spruce]

Omg I totally should have tysm!

[tough spruce]

Awh Ty!

[tough spruce]

Yeah like progressing to the small inconveniences into your day that would have actually been really good thank you so much for your advice it’s quite helpful thank you!