#I've been bought and I've been sold...
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I think there's a couple of grammar / spelling issues? (Week / I couldn't speak leave me at home)
From my interpretation—I think this talks about father issues, probably? And how growing up has changed you, comparing yourself to the kid you once were?
Besides that, I really like the way you describe living and how it feels like surviving—"It followed me into the sunset that embellished hell as it's sanctuary".
Yes there was a grammar mistake I'm so sorry about that, it's meant to be "weak" not "week", I hope you enjoyed it though:)
I've just realized, although it is technically a grammar mistake, it could also be seen as a spelling mistake as it's been a long week and he's very tired and unfocused