#"Secret To Me?"

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boreal nova
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I try to dissect the secret to me
Raw imperfection encapsulates my tiny brown eyes
Slowly crafting my odyssey
And tearing my earth-bound ties

My messy mullet lays home to birds of paradise
I romanticize bittersweet summer memory
I smother my remarks in spice
And proclaim myself "public enemy"

My eyelashes lay naturally long
I chuckle with a cynic's smirk
Under indigo headphones, entranced by an escapist song
Lusting as I lurk

My rosey cheeks nearly consume my face
With shame, I keep my weak chin high
With troubling thick lines, I trace
Some other-worldly guy

Unbuttoned flannels hug my frame
As I grip my sketchbook against my body
Traversing with turmoil, yet tame
Bewilderment growing in my headspace lobby

I ripped out bygone pages off the outdated book,
And buried them under the washed-up wishing well
They crucified the "cross-eyed crook"
As his bulging belly dived into the waters of hell

These legs once ran wild, and free
Now buried by pink shorts, and flesh
In my fanatical fantasies, I race to the sea
Now youth screams below the mesh

I once neglected my name
Drunk on pure discord
I burned my honor to flame
As I shat on the good lord

I concocted a mythology, imprisoned in my head
Crucial knowledge faded shades of gray
As I grew gardens on ideas, long dead
And gandered to the gay

Now that I possess poem and pen
My phoney life is spent behind phone
Wonderful diversion is no godsend
The secret to me? A creative cracked alone.

urban hazel
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i interpret it as how you see yourself and it's definitely written in an interesting way! you compare yourself to multiple things which I love <33 keep writing!

elfin berry
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Wow I love the analogies you have embedded within the sequence of your poem. Especially the line “Drunk on pure discord” resonates with me so much! I’m addicted to discord especially this server. Your imagery is immaculate. Well done ❤️❤️💯💯🌹🌹

verbal bone
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god i love your stuff, they always fill me with like? feels i can't explain

proper stagBOT
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*god i love your stuff,

they always fill me with like?

feels i can't explain*

rich nacelle