Soldier On | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

hollow valley Apr 22, 2024, 2:31 AM

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I like the repetition of Soldier On for every stanza.
It gives off a very commanding tone ( commander-like ).

The last stanza is my favourite out of the three.
Well done!

hardy urchin Apr 22, 2024, 2:33 AM

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I wrote it backwards, lol

hardy urchin Jan 29, 2025, 4:40 AM

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Tran

dry thicket Jan 29, 2025, 4:40 AM

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TRASH

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Nah Jk, good poem for the first.

hardy urchin Jan 29, 2025, 4:42 AM

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This isnt my first

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My first is still my favourite

#Soldier On