Hello! I would like a feedback and ideas :) Should i change something? | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

topaz crane Apr 19, 2024, 8:53 AM

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open ermine Apr 19, 2024, 9:10 AM

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Beautiful. Don’t change anything

topaz crane Apr 19, 2024, 9:15 AM

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thank you :)

fierce palm Apr 19, 2024, 3:04 PM

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Hi, I would reccomend you match the rhyming patterns, but that is absolutely stunning!

topaz crane Apr 20, 2024, 8:03 AM

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Thank you for the feedback!

merry silo Apr 20, 2024, 12:49 PM

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IT IS GOOD.

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not bad.

#Hello! I would like a feedback and ideas :) Should i change something?