Deja vu | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

lone sail Apr 15, 2024, 7:02 PM

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Familiar Surroundings
A scent unfolding around
Infinite Staircases
Painted by each scene, that felt like a deja vu

One filled with loving memories
Other filled with reveries
A shattered one showing an unexpected invitation to a lost soul
Making it take a Moon Tour
“I remember seeing this, but where”
Suddenly petal falls from the sky
Like stars
Ideas flaming up but none match the image
What image?
An forgotten image tasting bittersweet
Anon it vanished
Leaving this one pondering what memory fade with the wind

Just another Deja vu.

burnt blaze Apr 15, 2024, 7:04 PM

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This is a really cute poem

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I think it describes the feeling of deja vu in quite a right way

sharp anvilBOT Apr 15, 2024, 7:04 PM

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*I think it describes

the feeling of deja vu

in quite a right way*

burnt blaze Apr 15, 2024, 7:05 PM

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You did a great job

lone sail Apr 15, 2024, 7:06 PM

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burnt blaze You did a great job

tysmmmmm 💗💗💗

burnt blaze Apr 15, 2024, 7:07 PM

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Of course 🙂

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I love the occasional contrast in description in some parts of the poem

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It's confusing, just like deja vu

#Deja vu