#Subjective objectivity

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neat bear
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Every perception of the world is unique, subjective
People see the good i see in the world as bad
And i do the opposite
How can we be so blind to each others view?

The thing is, one's subjectivity becomes objectivity
When you realise that your own belief cannot be proved wrong,even after a rational analysis:
Nothing in this world belongs to you, it doesnt owe you anything,instead ,
You owe it everything, even the act of living your existence.
We are born with nothing, get in possesion of nothing and then die with nothing, yet we feel full of what the world borrows us.

I am of no origin if I feel alienated from this world
For I am born in this wicked world,
Which is the purest form of altruism
As it gives you life and you willingly give it back

gusty kiln
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I love the alienated emotion in this poem.
Though if I were to make one critique : Stanza 2's glaring length.

It's so long that it's the only thing I saw apart from the poem in its entirety.

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Ah there we go