#Disneyland

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analog wigeon
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I unravelled in a kingdom thou shall never be.
The sizzling wind tangled the soul of me.
The coldness of thin air swept against my skin.
A destination of heaven punishing me within.

Undeterred by the frigid, sailing winds,
I explored the path to where wonder begins.
The extravagant beauty of wonderland.
The one thou shall never understand.

The potent castle gleamed with freedom.
Like a potion within its own kingdom.
The honour of capturing portraits within it.
Embodying the mesmerising memories that emit.

Transitorily, my eyes glared upon the Tron,
Or shall I call the eye of the eagle that won.
Its heroic speed fled into the stark heavens.
Glistening and glowing its potent weapons.

Shivering scared I was to enter.
The regretful words I uttered in the centre.
The speed of insanity drove my heart delirious.
Yet, its powerfulness was seriously mysterious!

As my fingertips metamorphosed into icy-pole sticks,
My soul became external ice bricks.
I was utterly frozen in thin air,
Yet, still determined to find attractions in despair.

Transiently, I vaulted on a sampan.
Regretfully slower than how sloths ran.
Ten minutes of torture viewing the pathetic
caricatures,
I was relieved to exit the dreaded implicatures.

Just three minutes late, all restaurants have closed.
I was furiously opposed!
Hunger crept in stronger than lightning in dismay.
Like a predator stalking a frightened prey.

In the final moments, I rushed expeditiously.
My fleeting gaze saw the scene viciously.
As the intimidating pirates of the Caribbean thrive,
I was surreptitiously frightened alive.

Swishing and swirling through the canoe,
Vivid scenery arose true.
Splattered by chlorine-scented water,
Simultaneously, viewing pirates slaughter.

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Continued:

Exiting the tunnel in relief,
I sprinted to capture scenes of extravagant fireworks in belief.
Within seconds, the spectacle commenced.
My eyes diverged, my heart tensed.

The boisterous music sprung alive.
Glowing neon lights flashed and thrive.
Sparkling fireworks exploded in the moonlight.
Colours of spectacular rainbows unite into light.

— Galaxy

Please comment your thoughts and feedback below!

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@blissful sonnet
@frosty glacier
@honest mural
@undone jetty
@coarse flare
Would love to hear from y’all!

honest mural
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yep, as expected, it is as good as old disney.

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it is self-explanatory i you have watched disney movies.

blissful sonnet
honest mural
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ANd works just as well without the references bieing noticed.

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/8.3

analog wigeon
analog wigeon
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Haven’t actually watched any Disney movies

honest mural
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my word, guy didn't watch Pirates of the Carribean.

undone jetty
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saved, will read it later

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am busy with schoolworks rn

analog wigeon
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No worries!! Good luck with your homework

blissful sonnet
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wow I like this poem, theres a lot of words I havent seen before in this poem and the message wtih heaven, the pirates of the carribean etc... was really good

blissful sonnet
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fleeting gaze adage what do u mean by that tho?

analog wigeon
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Ah by adage I meant the word “saw” haha

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It might not be the most suitable in this context

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Simply that line meant I ran to see the fireworks as quick as I can

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And thanks a lot guys!! Glad you both enjoyed it

blissful sonnet
young gateBOT
blissful sonnet
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cause what I read in the dictionary adage is like an old saying or wise words