#A window to eternity

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grizzled dawn
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In the soft contours of your splendid face,
Radiates a beauty that's boundless in grace.
An aurora that never fades away,
A charm that warms the heart each day.

Your eyes, stars in a tranquil night,
In their glow, a beauty takes flight.
Radiance that illuminates my soul,
In a dance of light, making me whole.

Each smile, a sun rising anew,
On your lips, sweetness rings true.
And as I gaze deep into your eyes,
A window to your heart, where love lies.

In this landscape of unmatched delight,
I find the beauty that fills my sight.
In the warmth of your embrace, a gentle lair,
Where love blooms with each loving stare.

Thus, immersed in your enchanting grace,
I discover the essence of a sacred embrace.
And in your eyes, the purest truth I see,
A window to eternity.

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@rapid gull

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@lament grove

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@ivory dragon

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@lavish sail

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@devout fiber

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@ocean spindle

devout fiber
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Not fair.

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Where is the part 1, I wanna read that too.

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@grizzled dawn

lavish sail
grizzled dawn
ocean spindle
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I love this. I like how you use vivid imagery to capture the way you see this person and your love for them

grizzled dawn
grizzled dawn
grizzled dawn
lament grove
grizzled dawn
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Can i tag you in another?

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I think you will be like

lament grove
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I like this rico

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But I must say for me this gets overshadowed by the 1st part

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That’s just lovely.

grizzled dawn
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The first part is my masterpiece

lament grove
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Yeaa

lament grove
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That’s perfect

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And tbh

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I would even say it’s perfect without the second part

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The second one can be a completely new one

grizzled dawn
lament grove
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Whattt?

grizzled dawn
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A window to eternity

grizzled dawn
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Read now

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The end

lament grove
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Okey lemme see

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Dude

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Perfect now

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So now it has nothing to do with the 1st

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Plus the 1 stands alone as ur finest work

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One of em at least

grizzled dawn
lament grove
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It is dude

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Literally

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From the ones I’ve read

grizzled dawn
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Hahah is a lovelly poem really

devout fiber
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Oh, i read this one.

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I think the meter can improve but other than that, nice one.

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7.3/10.

grizzled dawn
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Ty man

rapid gull
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beautiful love poem, great job

grizzled dawn
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@shell dawn

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Its not a continue

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Its just a way to use window