#Hi, It's Me, A Smile!

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modest flame
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Hey, it’s me, a smile, may I appear on your face?
Why not? I could give you some solace,
In shadows deep, where sorrows tread,
I appear and a light is spread.
I am a beacon bright in the darkest night,
I am a whispered hope, for you, a gentle flight.

In your curves that dance, in your eyes that gleam,
I am a universe that unfolds, only a silent dream.
Through your trials faced and burdens borne,
I persist, on your visage a grace adorned.

I speak of joys, I bleed of love untold,
Whispers of secrets kept, of stories old.
In tender moments, shall I softly shine?
Sing a melody of your pacing heart's designs.

I am a smile, a hopeful gift, in every face,
I am a glimpse of happiness, a sacred space.
So let me bloom, let me stay awhile,
For in my warmth, we find out that life is worthwhile.

desert temple
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Rawr 🦖 What’s the meaning your poem?

desert temple
tawny compass
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Hehe, the first line reminded me of Mario.

modest flame
modest flame
tawny compass
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Very, very good.

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The first two lines are just perfect.

modest flame
tawny compass
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And flow and meter is consistent, and the theme is not too vague to not grasp (ignore @desert temple 🤣, no offence human, jk) and not to small to say, "ah, just another poem." I like it. 8.7/10. (Tied with two poems, and this it till date the highest I ever rated.)

modest flame
desert temple
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@spiral ledge

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@spiral ledge

spiral ledge
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I'm already here

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Dummy

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The rhythm is good as well the ending

tropic torrent
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@split horizon

split horizon
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I love this poem

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I love all of this

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Is really perfect!

spiral ledge
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Damn shawty

modest flame
split horizon
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Ok you win

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Im really pretty actually

modest flame
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Get a room lol

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@hazy lantern

visual ether
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@rich pivot

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@shrewd sundial

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@worn spoke

rich pivot
modest flame
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hehehe thaaaanks hon!!!

celest agate
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WOW WOW WOW I absolutely love this piece Storm!! You have turned my storm into a smile of joy (no pun intended) haha 😝

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So thank you for sharing this masterpiece with me

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Also reminded me of antihero by Taylor swift

modest flame
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awwwwwww thank you soooo much Galaxy...Im glad that my mission was accomplished

celest agate
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Honestly she should change the lyrics to “Hi, it’s me, I’m the smile! It’s me…”

celest agate
worn spoke
hazy lantern
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Very sweet and happy, I like the rhymes and meter a lot.

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I love the first stanza especially

modest flame
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aww thanks a lot!! hope it gave you some ideas??

hazy lantern
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it did, thanks

modest flame
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@wispy sierra

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@ornate plank

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@rich pivot

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@rich pivot

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@rugged karma

rich pivot
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AWH i love this

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its like you're personifying smiles and its speaking to me. i love the way u put it.

rugged karma
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This one's a stormy one aye

rugged karma
modest flame
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I’m tryna get this one onto Starboard 😭

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rugged karma
rich pivot
rugged karma
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where can u find

rich pivot
rugged karma
modest flame
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vague nimbusBOT
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*If you get five stars

on your poem then it gets

featured in Starboard*

rich pivot
modest flame
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The star reaction symbol ⭐️

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This one

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You get five of these

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@thorn karma
I SUMMON THEE

thorn karma
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Oh my god i love the first line 😭

modest flame
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Hehehe 🤭 glad you did!!!!

thorn karma
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Wonderful poem! Made my day

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Yes, smiled today

thorn karma
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Just react with star yourself when you post poem. Our own star does not count but people like me just react with whatever reactions they see on the poem
So just like that out of 10, atleadt 5 will just drop a star react

modest flame
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@arctic atlas

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@still quartz

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@hollow nexus

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@rich pivot

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@rich pivot

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@gaunt cape

hollow nexus
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Nah nah it’s alright

wispy sierra
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Is this poems trying to convince us to smile or am I hallucinating 😭

modest flame
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IT IS CONVINCING YOU TO SMILE

delicate shoal
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☹️

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10/10 poem, -10 points because i DIDNT SMILE

modest flame
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Eh Wha—

delicate shoal
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i lied

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i did smile

modest flame
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Thenks

tulip mulch
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@pale moss

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@crude sparrow you'd like this.

crude sparrow
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Wowza

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@modest flame

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Delicious

modest flame
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Yeee thenks ✨✨

pale moss
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I love it really, it's quite bright and hopeful it's really lovely!