#Heaven in hell

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clever trench
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Within the nebulous smoky horizon,
Depths of soulless, silvery clouds clustered.
The formation of sorrow gradually wizen.
A tornado fabricates as if incarceration occurred.

As the glowing ray of warm, golden sunlight shines,
I sense the warmth within the stark coldness.
Drawing compelling distinctions across the lines.
As if it was paradise.

Yet, the magnetic-iron clouds growled.
Hauling the radiant energy up into the galaxy.
As if the Lord howled.
Praying for peace yet giving destruction.

I was mesmerised.
Such compelling scenery engendered my tears of joy.
As if the act was memorised.
True beauty within the devil…

The extravagant gradient explodes beneath its surface.
A masterpiece of emotions precipitates.
My eyes rejuvenated through resurface.
Shadows of nature stood against the protagonist.

Where the negativity of hell counteracts with glowing heaven.
I could never envy such an aesthetically pleasing scene.
The utter beauty of a dream at age seven.
I am glad it was a piece of heaven in hell.

— Galaxy

Please let me know what you think and give your piece of constructive feedback!

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Credits: @crimson vector for the inspiring photography

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@wide hound
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I would really appreciate if y’all can give some feedback! Thanks

fathom fossil
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Rn I am meditating

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I will feedback later

clever trench
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Ah no worries!! Thanks

wide hound
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wow this poem is awesome, the theme heaven in hell is so unique and different

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great job , word choice is incredible

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background photo beautiful

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the first line is beautifully written by the way

clever trench
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Thank you!!

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clever trench
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Yayyy I’m green haha