#Nightmares (TW. death/suicide/blood)

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tribal zodiac
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Two hours…
Such a short time.
Yet, such a lengthy scene.
Is it reality?

It’s 5 a.m.
I haven’t slept yet.
As I ambled away to my bedroom,
My mother called.

She requested that I go out with her.
To the external world.
I denied.
Tiredness won.

Action commences.
Hands dripping cold sweat.
My heart is pounding.
It’s been hours.
My mother has not returned.

I vaguely recall she was going to the store nearby.
I rushed down the fleeting stairs of our apartment.
My mind filled with a billion compartments.
I hesitated.

I rushed from store to store.
Trying to find her in the early morning.
The sky was still stalk sapphire.
Strangeness began…

The store turned into a maze within a maze.
As if I was trapped inside eternity.
Without escape.
I ran in the speed of light.
Trying to escape…
As soon as possible.

Captivity creeps upon my soul.
I rushed back to my apartment.
Yet, I could not find it.
As if I was in a whole new universe.

How uncanny.
When I attempted to open the door,
A saw my eldest uncle floating in thin air.
Like a translucent ghost.

I gasped for air.
When I entered,
I saw dead corpses.
One of my cousin.
One of my grandma.

Horrendously uncanny.
It’s an absolute nightmare unfolding beneath my skin.
My veins swelled.
Blood pooling inside my eyes.

Tears flooding down my cheeks.
Spine-chilling.
Blood-curling.
Nerve-wracking.
Petrified by the nightmare.

Am I trapped in insanity?
I exit the murder scene.
I gasped….
Breathlessness crawled within my chest.
I looked down the window —
From the tenth storey.

I nearly jumped.
It wasn’t suicide.
Nor was I suicidal.
I just want it all to end.

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Continued:

Scared to death I was.
I lost all my loved ones.
Yet, I did not even find my mother.
I recall monsters chasing me around the block of flats.

My heart is beating out of control.
Like a faulty computer system running incomprehensible code.
I just saw janitors walking by…

I couldn’t jump.
They stopped me.
I could not imagine the devastating pain it would be.
Yet, my heart had already been shattered.

Ain’t no way it could be fixed.
I will forever have PTSD.
Traumatised I was…
I just could not do it.

My eyes opened wide.
Into reality.
My head was spinning.
Insane fogginess accompanied by migraines.
Sheets covered with soaking, icy-cold sweat.

I realised.
That was not reality.
I just woke myself into reality.
(I sighed in relief…)
The reality of nightmares…

— Galaxy

Please let me know what your thought are! Anyone experienced an even crazier nightmare than this?

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@shy locust
@analog cliff
@fast plaza
@vague latch
@desert furnace
Since y’all have given wonderful constructive feedback for many poems here, I would highly appreciate if you can share your thoughts on mine!

tribal zodiac
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Yes I would love that!!

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Hopefully it’s not too long for you haha

vague latch
vague latch
tribal zodiac
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Wow thank you so much for the narration once again!! You just made the nightmare come into reality in the best way imaginable

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I also love how you spoken that with such emotion

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And yes it was a dream I had yesterday

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And thanks for the advice

desert furnace
desert furnace
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@tribal zodiac I think this poem should be in sensitive poetry just by reading the tw

tribal zodiac
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Ah yes may bad and I did post this in sensitive poetry as well