The Same -- Amethyst Xin | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

wet lava Apr 2, 2024, 2:10 AM

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.dm me to repost the poem, if you want to read (a bit paranoid keeping my poems out in servers for too long, sorry peachcat )

sinful dew Apr 2, 2024, 2:29 AM

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I enjoyed this a lot! I love your imagery and expressions! The philosophical edge the poem has too did resonate with me. Thank you so much for sharing!

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@wet lava

wet lava Apr 2, 2024, 2:30 AM

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SaberSaysPretty thank you so much for the feedback

wet lava Apr 2, 2024, 2:30 AM

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sinful dew <@1088627708772221008>

Is there a poem of yours you would like me to review?

sinful dew Apr 2, 2024, 2:32 AM

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wet lava Is there a poem of yours you would like me to review?

Sure, this is my most recent one

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wet lava Apr 2, 2024, 2:32 AM

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sinful dew Apr 2, 2024, 5:04 AM

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Your poem captures the struggle of hiding one's true self and the call to embrace our humanity and live with courage and self-love. It's beautifully expressed and deeply resonant. Keep writing from the heart; )

wet lava Apr 3, 2024, 6:19 AM

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@odd parrot

odd parrot Apr 3, 2024, 6:20 AM

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This poem is so real. Absolutely beautiful 👏👏

wet lava Apr 3, 2024, 6:20 AM

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SaberSaysPretty thank you

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I have another if you want to read?

odd parrot Apr 3, 2024, 6:21 AM

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My feedback skills isn't very good I'm sorry

odd parrot Apr 3, 2024, 6:21 AM

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wet lava I have another if you want to read?

OFC

#The Same -- Amethyst Xin