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My heart no longer skips an extra beat with the divine sound of her voice.
My gaze no longer gets tangled within her enchanted eyes.
As such, my heart feels empty,
yet it is filled with a visage of memories.
With my brain revolving around certain thoughts,
allowed me to indulge in the pleasure of yearning.
While my feelings for her gradually fade,
I am reminded of the exact poignant feeling of my love.
||note: the word means loss of feelings for someone who was formerly loved||
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@terse nacelle
terse nacelle
instead of using long 2 lines
convert them to 4 lines and make a proper stanza
it could be a personal preference, but I do like them in that way
terse nacelle
My heart no longer skips an extra beat with the divine sound of her voice.
My ga...
Well you had crush on someone
and you are loosing that crush on someone rn
last yew
instead of using long 2 lines
convert them to 4 lines and make a proper stanza
i...
sure note takenn
mental furnaceBOT
sure note takenn
Wonderful! @last yew has just pregressed to level 1!
terse nacelle
You enjoyed those harmones, those butterflies in the stomach
And now you are not able to do that rn
last yew
Well you had crush on someone
and you are loosing that crush on someone rn
precisely yea
terse nacelle
Well I get it
the poem conveys it well
anyone who has experienced it should be able to get the meaning
nice poem, but I would love it more with structure
terse nacelle
add more weight into it
yeah
last yew
thanks bro
terse nacelle
Short poems are good at conveying one thing
large ones or ones with multiple parts
are good at keeping the reader engaged and explaining a scenario
last yew
Short poems are good at conveying one thing
thats exactly what im going for lol, Im bad at writing long ones
floral frigateBOT
last yew
I get lost easily in context and wander off
last yew
wtf
terse nacelle
thats exactly what im going for lol, Im bad at writing long ones
Check mine dude
They are cool
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