close your eyes..
imagine us dancing,
in a rain... of small drops
every drop is a proof of our love,
every sweet step of this dance,
It's a proof of our love,
So if you're looking for someone new... who can wipe your tears away...
What about me?
how about you and me...
together forever...
until the last drop of this infinite rain that falls from the skies stops,
you and me together forever...
would you come to Brazil
or would I travel to Spain...
or wherever you are...
just to have you in my arms...
just to dry her tears in our dance...
just to kiss you...
just looking into your green eyes
that speak more than a thousand words in the sweet silence of the conversation of our hearts...
Just loving you
with all the feeling of love
that my heart can... offer.
#Close your eyes
fluid echo
rocky pier
you put wherever twice
but its a nice poem try to like switch up the writing format a bit
fluid echo
but its a nice poem try to like switch up the writing format a bit
Better now?
rocky pier
Better now?
its better now but that last line you can just split it in 2
cause thats like a bit too long
fluid echo
Now?
fluid echo
its better now but that last line you can just split it in 2
Yeah i think is better
fluid echo
This poem means a lot for me im gladyou like the content and helping me to improve
fluid echo
yes its better now
Ty vindi