#A Quiet Car Ride

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onyx geyser
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@humble flume @honest light

honest light
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You ate this up so hard

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Actual serve

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It obviously could use a tad more shaping with editing, but I think all poems can

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You better edit this 😡

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At some point

humble flume
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wowww this was beautiiful

humble flume
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the introductory 2 lines were mindblowingly awesome

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wow this is such a quality read i-

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also this is very my style, the ampersands, the italicization