#Love too much

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patent merlin
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-Hey....

-NO! no... don't come back...

-but I...

-No! Please don't come, I'm afraid to look into your eyes again.
our ending hurts, but IT WAS NOT MY FAULT!

-Everything I did was for love, not to throw you into thin stones for painful moments in your mind

-everything I did, every rose I gave you, YOU threw a piece of my heart in the trash along with them, nailing it to the stakes you said you didn't know existed

-What else could I do? you are that way
a stranger, exaggerated, a person who loves too much, I didn't expect all this...

-the truth is that you loved the poetry, not the poet, you liked the smell, not the roses and at the end of it all... what did you want? I am a poet! an exaggerated man whose words of love and feelings are my guides.

-does that make you superior? The truth is that you loved it too much, you know? Every poem you gave me was so beautiful... I felt indebted, I thought I would get used to it... you were very good to me...

-I never did it expecting something in return... I never thought that loving too much was a problem... I never thought that intense emotions on a paper that would later be recited to a person to whom I would give my blood was another problem... Mere excuses only make me think more about why, and doubt is my greatest enemy now, I sink further into this ocean of despair as it tries to consume me with tsunamis of torturous thoughts that are not my fault...

(a poem in the format of a long and intense conversation without much figurative)

uncut harbor
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oh nice poem

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the ending part is really good

uncut cypress
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first time I see something like this

uncut harbor
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I sink further into this ocean of despair as it tries to consume me with tsunamis of torturous thoughts that are not my fault... this my favorite part

patent merlin
uncut cypress
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roses and the smell got me

uncut harbor
patent merlin
patent merlin
uncut harbor
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like is it a new poem

patent merlin
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Yes

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Its new

uncut harbor
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oh ok do u want to check out my new poems too ?

patent merlin
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YES

uncut cypress
uncut harbor
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theres plenty more new ones I did but I dont want to overload you

patent merlin
patent merlin
uncut cypress
uncut harbor
patent merlin
uncut cypress
patent merlin
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And shadow

uncut cypress
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it's not the title but discord made me do it

patent merlin
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Do you want see other poem in this format

uncut cypress
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yeeahh sure! maybe later, its almost midnight here and im drunk a lil :)