" Perfect "

[molten igloo]

they said nobody's perfect,
but have they seen you yet?

i feel bad for them,
they are not lucky enough to find a gem.
i think i must say it again.

you are perfect,
and thats a fact.

[molten drum]

It’s actually good

I tried changing it abit if ya wanna hear it

[solid lotus]

Good. Could be better using expanded vocab. I like it.

And the rhymes don't sit in my opinion, please work a little on that

[brave valley]

*And the rhymes don't sit

in my opinion, please work

a little on that*

- saturnmiller

[molten drum]

They’ve said nothings perfect,
But had they seen you ?

What a pity,
for they shall not see you.
How blessed I was,
To lay my eyes upon you .

For you are perfect,
And your beauty unmatched.

[uncut zealot]

These one is so pure loving it 🤍🤍🤍

[molten drum]

Yea