you're everything to me

[rich dragon]

You are everything to me.

There is so much beauty here..
I find you, in everything I see. 
I look at the moon, its gentle glow,
And I am reminded of our love;
Instantly connected,
Meant to be.
I gaze at the stars, their shining brilliance, 
And I see the beauty in your soul,
Full of radiance.

I watch the trees,
As they sway to the soft breeze,
The way our souls dance together
In perfect harmony..
Always at ease. 
I could watch the beauty of this world,
In all of its magnificent views,
Yet nothing will ever compare to you.
For you are everything beautiful to me,
And so much more.

I look at you,
And I see my home, my truest place, 
My beloved, my embrace.

[cunning zealot]

love

[heavy thunder]

You could say in perfect harmony instead or rhythm

[rich dragon]

Okay, thank you

[cunning zealot]

Lovely poem. I'm wondering though, how/why looking at the moon reminds you of your love. How does the moon instantly connect you to your person? With the stars their shining brilliance reminds you of the beauty in their soul, the trees swaying are like your souls dancing together... the one image that I feel isn't fully illustrated here is the moon.
In any case I hope the person you give this poem to appreciates the feeling and effort that went into it 🙂

[rich dragon]

There was one night, he wrote a song called to the moon. It was about how he felt and wishing to be together with this person.. then one night, he told me how he felt and he told me the song he wrote, was about me. How he felt for me. I had always loved the moon, but that night it had so much more meaning to me. It became so much more.

[woeful oriole]

love it, nothing left to say

[rich dragon]

Thank you

[cunning zealot]

How beautiful. If the reference to the moon in this poem has meaning to him, then that's the most important thing. Hope he loves it.

[rich dragon]

Thank you

[manic oyster]

wait youre sending this to someone? aww a confession?! then wait let me proofread it

everything is perfect!

[rich dragon]

Yes! And well we already know how we both feel , we've been talking for a while .. but I wanted to write something, just specifically for him.. I don't think he realizes how much I see in him and in writing, I can express it more fully

[rich dragon]

Thank you 🙂

[modest estuary]

pretty poem, liked it. i can vividly imagine the scenario in my mind.

[rich dragon]

Thank you

[woeful oriole]

This is perfect now, I love it, it is the truest poem, an embrace

[surreal yew]

*This is perfect now,

I love it, it is the truest

poem, an embrace*

- mustang1386

[rich dragon]

Thank you 🙂

[random sonnet]

I reslly wanted to read this but forgot, finally getting around to it now

I could really feel the love that went into this poem

[rich dragon]

Thank you !

[random sonnet]

Specific lines I liked
"Their shining brilliance"
"As they sway to the soft breeze"
"The way our souls dance together"
"And i see my home, my truest place"

There's a sense of warm found in the ending