déjà vu

[last knoll]

Of course it's 5:53 am I have a horrible sleep schedule and I want thoughts on this I think this needs work but of course comments and assistance is welcome :pourquoi:

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[cosmic wyvern]

nice poem love the concept

and title

same my sleep schedule is all over the place

[last knoll]

Thanks ! I'm wondering if I should edit it- I managed to put some rhymes there

[cosmic wyvern]

dont put rhymes if it dont need to be there

otherwise it will look force

[last knoll]

Agreed

I like the way I wrote it

[cosmic wyvern]

yes it came out very nice

[last knoll]

I feel like art is art and poetry is poetry it shouldn't rhyme all the time despite what people say

[last knoll]

Awee thank you !

[pure tundra]

Its a beautiful composition!

[last knoll]

@south idol another one for the books booka my late night writing is always good

[cosmic wyvern]

yes I agree people fail to realize that poetry doesnt have to rhyme all the time

thats not the true meaning of poetry

[last knoll]

Awee thank youu !

[last knoll]

My point

[last knoll]

YESS !

[cosmic wyvern]

Right ! would you like to check out some of my new work

[last knoll]

Of course !

[cosmic wyvern]

https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1218483014217109524https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1218495864780095508

[south idol]

i love this bc i have good déjà-vu sometimes 💞

love waking up to these omggg💗