revive | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

jade bone Mar 14, 2024, 8:55 AM

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I was so tired. Tired of trying, Sick of crying, Fighting my battles. With a faded smile , Amidst myself exhausted breath. With heavy heart, I decided, No matter what, I can't fall apart.

Again. With my tears as bullet, Shield made up of pain, Wore scar as armour, anger ignited the way, I pulled out mine sword of strength, And wore back my crown of love. Universe declared,

THE WAR BEGINS.....

livid moon Mar 14, 2024, 9:14 AM

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I like your imagery, and the message, good poem!

clever marsh Mar 14, 2024, 9:14 AM

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nice short poem

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i like the line shield made up of pain

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wore scar as armour clever !

jade bone Mar 14, 2024, 9:15 AM

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livid moon I like your imagery, and the message, good poem!

Really?? Thank youuu so much

teal fractalBOT Mar 14, 2024, 9:15 AM

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jade bone Really?? Thank youuu so much

Wonderful! @jade bone has just pregressed to level 1!

jade bone Mar 14, 2024, 9:16 AM

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clever marsh nice short poem

Thank you for appreciating

upbeat turret Mar 14, 2024, 9:56 AM

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"the world is my enemy" vibes...

#revive