#Autumn's Spring

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atomic plover
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Spring arrives, with buds anew,
Yet, all I see is the barren view.
Birds rejoice, in spring's delight,
While I savor winter's quiet night.

Bears stir from their winter's sleep,
While I yearn for dreams to keep.
Shall I journey on or fade away?
The next spring's arrival, unclear.

I wonder what the next spring will bring,
For this season feels like autumn's sting.

atomic plover
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Autumn's Spring

fallow field
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Omg the imagery of the bear is so good

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I love this poem the imagery is on point

nova comet
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First of all, the poem is amazing. It beautifully captures the bitteraweet essence of transitik and emotions.
Also i loved the uncertainity of the future which you expressed through the question of whether to continiue the journey or fade away, it just simple adds depth to the poem
Tbh its a wonderful
Solid 8/10

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Dont mind the typing errors...

atomic plover
atomic plover
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I wrote it while feeling down and was jealous of the bears sleeping away the sad months

lethal plume
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