a really wacky (but not in a bad sense) yet interesting poem tbh
#being the oldest
proud ice
runic jackalBOT
proud ice
really love that sort of teenage sort of vibe to it
lyric dagger
I feel like line 4 and 6 were a bit forced, especially line 6. I get that you meant to rhyme but modest doesn't rhyme with oldest. For the last line, I can't make out whether it's intentional or forced. As for the idea, well, it's there. You executed it well, just that you might need to make your rhymes more solid.
snow moss
a really wacky (but not in a bad sense) yet interesting poem tbh
aww thank you!
snow moss
really love that sort of teenage sort of vibe to it
oh i, well its probably because im a teenager