#Unwavering Solitary

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primal arch
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@azure steppe it's good

"Trying to tarnish his good name" read a little awkward to me. That line is a little basic. I'd use another word besides "trying"

scenic mist
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I really liked this one, your style of writing is actually very very similar to mine and here's an example: #1216537644666982501

azure steppe
scenic mist
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One thing, try not to put too much focus or emphasis on the rhymes

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You managed to rhyme it well with good meaning but for the future and other poems along the way, don't try to force the rhyme into it