Ghost of a broken heart | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

cinder bane Mar 11, 2024, 1:53 PM

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rigid garnet Mar 11, 2024, 5:45 PM

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ooooh I love the background too, it really works for this poem

cinder bane Mar 11, 2024, 5:45 PM

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Thanks I appreciate it 🙏🏼

mint spire Mar 11, 2024, 5:45 PM

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Love it

silver sirenBOT Mar 11, 2024, 5:45 PM

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mint spire Love it

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rigid garnet Mar 11, 2024, 5:45 PM

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As for the poem it's lovely

hearty hearth Mar 11, 2024, 6:12 PM

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I really like the theme. If you’re looking to further develop it, consider exploring the whys and hows - how does it haunt you? Why does it haunt you? When does it haunt you? Is it every time you go to bed? Is it because you have not forgotten this person? Is it that you see them in your every move? Show me how you’re feeling instead of telling

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