The Broken Day | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

slow snow Mar 11, 2024, 9:02 AM

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Saving

wild leaf Mar 11, 2024, 9:02 AM

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lol k

slow snow Mar 11, 2024, 9:31 AM

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So let me write a rhyme scheme please I want to save it dor later

AA
AA
ABB
AB
AB
ABC -I am unsure about this one
ABCDE

wild leaf Mar 11, 2024, 9:48 AM

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you're writing down my rhyme scheme? lol

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clever

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I could map all mine to compare

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that'd be neat

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I like to randomize them in my mind

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basically so they fit but never get stale

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@slow snow

slow snow Mar 11, 2024, 10:01 AM

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wild leaf you're writing down my rhyme scheme? lol

Well I believe structure is what I am at least a lil confident when analizing, and I like to write it, but I see it was intentional

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It starts in rhyme and then it kinda stops, but thats for you to decide.

tame sphinxBOT Mar 11, 2024, 10:01 AM

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*It starts in rhyme and

then it kinda stops, but thats

for you to decide.*

wild leaf Mar 11, 2024, 10:04 AM

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slow snow It starts in rhyme and then it kinda stops, but thats for you to decide.

aww that's cool

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everything is intentional lol

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maybe that's normal, maybe that's abnormal xD

slow snow Mar 12, 2024, 10:35 AM

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I won't really cover the message, because its higly subjective. Hmm I am thinking about poetic devices

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At one you use it really well, but I am thinking if I can find something

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You are using lots of methapors and comparisons.

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Maybe we could discuss if that is oxymorón
"Not love, yet I somehow love you, " But thats kinda questionable, at the same time, if its not oxymorón, then what.

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I like that part, but maybe its just my mood, but I find something a lil off here

wild leaf Mar 12, 2024, 10:49 AM

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hmmm people seem to have a bit of trouble understanding the vast meanings of things

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so...

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it's meant to be like

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it can be an oxymoron yes

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but it isn't a mistake

slow snow Mar 12, 2024, 10:51 AM

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wild leaf but it isn't a mistake

I don't mean as a mistake, I just believe it can be a lil off for me.

wild leaf Mar 12, 2024, 10:55 AM

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aww I understand

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would you like me to explain it?

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@slow snow

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oh btw by mistake I just mean it was intentional lol

tame sphinxBOT Mar 12, 2024, 11:02 AM

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*oh btw by

mistake I just mean it was

intentional lol*

wild leaf Mar 12, 2024, 11:02 AM

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it could've been wrong still lol

slow snow Mar 12, 2024, 11:03 AM

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wild leaf <@456226577798135808>

Ill do it after this class

wild leaf Mar 12, 2024, 11:06 AM

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ok lol

slow snow Mar 12, 2024, 11:27 AM

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Not love, yet somehow love you

this sentence I just believe it makes less sense to me
Does it means:
Don't feel like a love, yet somehow, I am obsessed with you.
-this is my interpretation of it.

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