Blame

[ebon knoll]

My day feel so horrible, I just want to stay home,
but should I blame you ?
My life is full of turmoil, blue and depression...
but should I blame you ?
I have a headache and my stomach is hurting like crazy !
but should I blame you ?
I'm making tons of bad decisions in my life,
but should I blame you ?
Your actions is your actions, you can't blame nobody but yourself.
You choose to walk right, then go ahead,
but if you choose to walk left, then that's on you !
Nobody can't make decisions for you, don't blame nobody for your poor choices in life.
We as humans tend to blame the next person for the bad decisions that we made,
which is not right to do, and we need to put an end to it.
You're blaming others because you need to boost your ego,
stop blaming others and blame your fragile thought process.
Stop playing the blame game, just use your head and your brain.

[wicked silo]

I feel put on the pedestal for no reason other than for the persona’s entertainment

[ebon knoll]

huh

lol

[wicked silo]

‘But should I blame you’

Usually if ur going for second PoV

U gotta justify the persona choice

Because it’s the persona lashing out at the reader

Not the writer

[ebon knoll]

but i can just change the pronoun in that case

?

i mean this is more so a message for people that blame others

so thats why i worded like that

[shut summit]

I love how the poem highlights the importance of personal responsibility and accountability for ones own actjkns and decisions
Also the poem clearly promotes a message of self awareness

Also

[ebon knoll]

yes thank you

[shut summit]

Yes the poem encourages self reflection and urges readers to stop playing the blame game

And focus on their own judgment

[ebon knoll]

right exactly and playing the victim

[shut summit]

Its good