Moonlight

[tardy finch]

You're my moonlight that dazzles in my heart,
you never let me down, you always raise me high.
You give me inspiration to distant creativities.
Your moonlight is a blessing from the white heavens above,
the taste of your moonlight is so divine.
It brings a graceful feeling inside,
you make my whole world burn with joy as time goes by.
Your moonlight is my protection from the darkness at night.
Your love is as bright as the sunshine, a blissful smile.
Your moonlight is too pure and authentic to hide,
you remind me of a sweet beautiful dream, I had in the winter time.
You're my shadow that embraces and follows me wherever I go.
Your moonlight is my world, my everything, my humble abode.

[mental spire]

Moonlight… 🌙 I love the way you connect it to so many different things. You also show the importance of the moon… ex “your moonlight is the protection from the darkness of the night” you really make me think about how if there wasn’t a moon the world would just be pitch dark, so it’s really touching and connectful 🥀 well done… truly, Subhan 🖤

[tardy finch]

Thanks for ur compliment and ur feedback

[verbal agate]

The 1st line really captured my attention, I visually see like a love story with the moon and an ocean. Symbols two loves with the moon being the ilustration of love. There are couplet that contrast each other "Your love is bright as the sunshine: .... moonlight is too pure ..... . The image has me perplex and yet intrigue. Visualing of dazzes, raide, taste of moonlight. It has a maloncholy type feeeling graping to love that is the light in this hopeless.

[tardy finch]

thanks for ur comment