Expensive | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

zealous cedar Mar 9, 2024, 9:08 AM

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What's more priceless,
Love or fame?
Money makes everything a mess,
While love ruins the same.

What makes you happier,
Love or fame?
Money makes relationships better,
While love feels the same.

What's more useless,
Love or fame?
Money makes you feel flawless,
While love shows you're not the same.

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@candid ingot @silk cliff @worn citrus

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@flat elm @still violet

candid ingot Mar 9, 2024, 9:10 AM

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😭😭bestttt

zealous cedar Mar 9, 2024, 9:10 AM

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Thank youuu🫶

flat elm Mar 9, 2024, 10:13 AM

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No. This one not for me. The sudden addition of money is not quite feels the more to the abstract nature. It is not a bad poem either. 6.2/10.

iron juniper Mar 9, 2024, 10:13 AM

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never experienced any of those blursob

iron juniper Mar 9, 2024, 10:14 AM

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I have 2 for you to critic?? can I dm

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I want them to remain secret

zealous cedar Mar 9, 2024, 10:14 AM

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It was a challenge :)

flat elm Mar 9, 2024, 10:14 AM

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Yeah, go ahead.

flat elm Mar 9, 2024, 10:15 AM

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I am not saying it is bad. It is just not for me.

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