Good night

[lunar mesa]

The Majesty that made the clouds in heaven,
The waves in the ocean,
The drips that wet my eyelids,
Fireflies in dark silence,
The dusk with purple glow
Dyeing the pure, soft snow,

Is what saves me at night,
And stills my mind.

[midnight solar]

The poem is really good. I liked it a lot. I imagined a very beautiful scenery on reading this.

[lunar mesa]

thank you~

[somber delta]

I interpreted this as crying clouds being the eyes, waves being tears, fireflies being the feeling you get in your throat. Im prolly so off from the true intention here...
Overall a pretty nice poem but I'd word thr last sentence of the first stanza differently

[lunar mesa]

Exactly! I also had the same idea about that last line. Thanks for the feedback~

[analog hare]

I really like the juxtaposition in the images

and the personification

also the tension i guess between the beautiful and the sad and the serenity at the end