As Life Goes On -Rider | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

distant surge Mar 11, 2024, 10:19 PM

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God it's long

unkempt fractal Mar 11, 2024, 10:20 PM

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Yea, I had come out of surgery, too much time on my hands cuz I couldn't sleep and too much morphine in my blood, I just lay in bed without my phone and made this up in my head

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It was like a month ago

distant surge Mar 11, 2024, 10:22 PM

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This is REALLY good @unkempt fractal . I mean it. It's really deep and it tells so much in so little words

unkempt fractal Mar 11, 2024, 10:23 PM

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distant surge This is REALLY good <@620883181880475648> . I mean it. It's really deep and it t...

thanks homie, love you for all the feedback

distant surge Mar 11, 2024, 10:23 PM

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Np

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I've got a flower beside my cherry 🥰 lmao

unkempt fractal Mar 11, 2024, 10:24 PM

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dont get it

unkempt fractal Mar 13, 2024, 1:44 PM

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As Life Goes On -Rider

unkempt fractal Mar 29, 2024, 12:55 PM

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@leaden sparrow

fringe hornet Mar 29, 2024, 1:59 PM

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Wow I was going through posts and saw yours .
|| You are so bad you didn't share this one while we talked about it|| okay so wonderful and I love the way you explained the life journey in short words , from birth to the deathbed scene.....
'with growing age came tough love and soon , the present became the past' these lines are just kinda relatable. And the lines : 'so much wasted potential , I can't watch anymore , in a dark and foreboding place , aspirations and dreams hit the floor . Nice rhyming and flow . pat