How thee struck my freedom
down with my imagination's
power from thee's sarcasm;
I hope to shard thy mind
with the demolition thee
caused to my self-worth
over the years that I
thought I was in a strange
place called, "Hell".
#To my Enemies
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cheers for the feedback!
i can understand the meaning behind it clearly, and it’s worded quite beautifully. i did notice “thee” was used quite a few times though; that was the only thing that threw me off.
Archaic pronouns.