5 Senses

[cunning pasture]

You see the clouds and the sun in the day
You see the stars and the moon in the night
You hear the birds chirping in the day
You hear the owls hooting in the night
You touch the grass in the day
You touch the floor at night
You smell a bouquet of flowers
You smell a bottle of perfume
You taste a sandwich in the day
You taste a stuffed turkey in the night

[idle bolt]

well it is good, maybe try using different synonyms for the day and night

[cunning pasture]

Oh k ty

[warm sage]

Hm

I like the simplicity of this

[cunning pasture]

this is literally day 1 of me writing poetry yeah

cause u see the day

[warm sage]

I see

How come u wrote it?

[cunning pasture]

cause I wanted a poem to the 5 senses

[warm sage]

And btw

[warm sage]

I see

Can I send u a poem

I would love ur opinion

[cunning pasture]

YES sure

[warm sage]

Dm?

[cunning pasture]

u can send it here

[warm sage]

I don’t wanna put it in the server

I don’t feel confident enough

[cunning pasture]

ok well send it in dm