Green

[hexed sluice]

Green represents me
Green represents mother nature
Green represents granary
Green represents the frog you see on the lily pad
Green represents good health and good fortune
Green represents recovery and rejuvenation
Green is my favorite color
Green has many different shades and
I'm one of those shades of green

[reef hamlet]

Idky in my head if the last line was ‘I’m green with envy’ that would’ve been an absolute punch in contrast with the other verses

Just purity and cynical natures colliding

[hexed sluice]

ohh k that green with envy went over my head

i think i get it

tho

[reef hamlet]

I mean you did great

Just presenting a different outlook

[sharp forge]

I agree I like it

[hexed sluice]

thank you all and this my first time making a poem

i have a few more i made today i will post them

[sharp forge]

Fun fact humans were literally supposed to genetically like the color green, to search out plants and all that

[reef hamlet]

Ohhh that makes sense, this format is quite rare I’d say

[hexed sluice]

wow thats new to me

[sharp forge]

It's been awhile since I heard that fact so

[hexed sluice]

yeah i just went with the flow

and wrote what feels right

[reef hamlet]

That’s how most get into poetry

My first poem idk how I wrote in iambic meter

[sharp forge]

Real, I did that too

[hexed sluice]

yea and i wasnt even trying to rhyme at all

[reef hamlet]

I didn’t even know what that meter was

[hexed sluice]

damm thoughts just come in ur head

let me post the next one

[reef hamlet]

Yea that happened just now

I wrote one on a whim

So you know

Let go of the chainsssss

[hexed sluice]

🔥

[honest dagger]

Beautiful poem again man 😁

[hexed sluice]

thanks lol

[hexed sluice]

Green

[reef hamlet]

rawr

[hexed sluice]

@crystal pike

[hexed sluice]

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[hazy halo]

@hexed sluice

[hexed sluice]

yes poetica found it for me

[hazy halo]

oh lol

[fervent imp]

Hehehe

We're bumping this poem back up again.

[hazy halo]

let's gooo

oh, i liked the poem, simple and easy to understand. beautifully defined the connection with Green,the feelings associated with it

[hexed sluice]

yes thank you