My home

[icy pelican]

It's spring but still it's cold
Long conversations with wind I hold
The butterfly is beautiful than most people's soul
And I am admiring the nature all alone

The breeze that comes to me
Is calming as the green I see
The trees are tall
Standing there like the most charming wooden doll

The creatures I see
Are patient than most humans including me
The walk I take
Makes me realise who I am and what I could be

This nature's my home
And I could do anything
To protect and live here
Rather than the busy world's sea...

[distant temple]

I think you are missing a "more" in the third verse and second vers of third stanza, other than that it's a really pretty poem with nice imagery and I love te idea of nature being your home

[rare pollen]

Amazing

[icy pelican]

I get what you are saying but that was kind of intentional... To show that sometimes people don't have any patience so you can't even add more to compare them with other creatures...

[distant temple]

as patient then? or less patient?

if you would rather leave it as is, it's your poem that's fine though <3

[icy pelican]

I am trying to say that animals have alot of patience but people (sometimes) have non so adding or not adding a more would mean the same thing... But if the 'more' will add a bit more sense then I am ready to add that too and I appreciate your honest feedback...